Poetry? Me?
My vain attempt at poetry when I was 17 or 18. Found it again just now and here it is.
"Lost" is a place I have chosen to be.
A spot between "here" and "there."
A little beyond "Yes i can see"
and "that's nice, but I don't care."
It's not a place that i want to stay
but there are times i wish i could
I go there when I can't find my way
Or whenever I'm misunderstood.
So if you see that look in my eye
don't rush me,worry or fret.
I will come back but as hard as i try
I don't want to come back yet.
"Lost" is a place I have chosen to be.
A spot between "here" and "there."
A little beyond "Yes i can see"
and "that's nice, but I don't care."
It's not a place that i want to stay
but there are times i wish i could
I go there when I can't find my way
Or whenever I'm misunderstood.
So if you see that look in my eye
don't rush me,worry or fret.
I will come back but as hard as i try
I don't want to come back yet.
Labels: dont know why, poetry, Random
posted by Dark Covenant at
11:24 PM
11 Comments:
woah, hidden talent or rather latent talent . It is a very nice succinct poem , makes a lot of sense and strikes a chord :)
Its very nice :)...Tanu
I really, really liked this. Had me mulling over every line.
Very nice. :)
Varun - Thank you so much! Didn't know it would be such a hit when I wrote it ;)
Tanu - What a surprise! You actually follow what I write? Thanks really.
Merin - Teehee! I really found it childish then. Glad you like it :)
This is excellent ! BP is the best thing to have happened to bogpost :)
- Secret Admirer
Really beautiful...I think everyone can relate to it owing to experiences in their lives at some point or the other...
PS: if you give me the rights, i would love to give it a chord structure and make a song out of it ;)
Thank you! You totally have the rights my friend. Only if you'd come out of anonymity :)
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Hey, I like this poem. Especially since "Lost" is a place everyone visits when misunderstood and I am more often than not misunderstood.
I like the last paragraph the most.It is elegant and simple.
Yes, the inner compulsion to make the poem rhyme with an a-b-a-b sequence shows that it could be one of your earlier attempts at poetry. But damn, that's deep for a 17-year old! In no way a vain attempt, that I can definitely say.
Background guitar tune will come soon. ^^
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